[davecarama]

It is not bad, Some of their shots of the car were actually quite nice.

The intro is way too long, it loses too many viewers. The beginning of the clip is the most important part. Your job with the beginning is to throw a hook and make them want to watch to the end.

He does need to tighten up some of the transitions (especially while inside the car while talking about the radio, etc...) It might be better if they show the items and not him at all here.

Maybe leave out some of the information they were including... like some of the silly comments (hard to drive, the window buttons, etc...) Maybe use info they can present as good, but show flaws; ex the tires that come with this machine are true gumballs, helping bring the turning g forces to an astounding ---, the down side is they will never make it to the second oil change.

And I always like to say "just because your computer gives you all those fancy effects it doesn't mean you need to use them ALL in your short video clip".

DC Grading scale rates this a solid B-. If they submit a fine cut with the revisions, I am sure it could reach B+ to A level

I would like to see the releases for the music and movie footage ;o)

And take it to a track for crissake! Show us what the thing can really do!

DC